Dit nummer is van Racoon genaamd No Mercy wat geen genade betekent. Ik heb gekozen omdat in het boek genadeloos wordt gehandeld door de drugsbende.
She walks in and says come on let's have it
She brings out the worst you can be
It's a good day for a bad habit
Don't you dare to disagree
(she likes to surf alone)
Cheap ass that thinks he's something groovy
Straight down from church you wanna bet
She'll play him like some kinda movie
And then smokes the last of his cigarettes
She's got no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the king
no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the king
no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for no king
No mercy for the king
She picks his heart like he is a pocket
She wears her hair like it is a crown
She sees straight through all his composing
She'll hold the leash good dog stay down
She's got no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the king
no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the king
no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the king
No mercy for the king
Oh there wont be any mercy
Not a less you got a diamond ring
Oh no there won't be no excuse me!
No mercy for the king or everything
no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the king
no mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the king
no mercy for no soldiers
No mercy for no king
No mercy oh no mercy
No mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for the soldiers
No mercy for no king
No mercy for no king
Dit liedje heet de A-team en is van Ed Sheeran. Ik heb het gekozen omdat het over drugs gaat en de manier om er aan te komen.
White lips, pale face
Breathing in snowflakes
Burned lungs, sour taste
Lights's gone, day's end
Struggling to pay rent
Long nights, strange men
And they say
She's in the class A team
Stuck in her daydream
Been this way since 18
But lately her face seems
Slowly sinking, wasting
Crumbling like pastries
And they scream
The worst things in life come free to us
Cos were just under the upper hand
And go mad for a couple of grams
And she don't want to go outside tonight
And in a pipe she flies to the motherland
Or sells love to another man
It's too cold outside
For angels to fly
Angels to fly
Ripped gloves, raincoat
Tried to swim and stay afloat
Dry house, wet clothes
Loose change, bank notes
Weary-eyed, dry throat
Call girl, no phone
And they say
She's in the class A team
Stuck in her daydream
Been this way since 18
But lately her face seems
Slowly sinking, wasting
Crumbling like pastries
And they scream
The worst things in life come free to us
Cos were just under the upper hand
And go mad for a couple of grams
And she don't want to go outside tonight
And in a pipe she flies to the motherland
Or sells love to another man
It's too cold outside
For angels to fly
An angel will die
Covered in white
Closed eye
And hoping for a better life
This time, we'll fade out tonight
Straight down the line
And they say
She's in the class A team
Stuck in her daydream
Been this way since 18
But lately her face seems
Slowly sinking, wasting
Crumbling like pastries
They scream
The worst things in life come free to us
And we're all under the upperhand
Go mad for a couple of grams
And we don't want to go outside tonight
And in a pipe we fly to the motherland
Or sell love to another man
It's too cold outside
For angels to fly
Angels to fly
To fly, fly
Angels to fly
To fly, to fly
Or angels to die
Dit is een gedicht over drugs en blowen. De dichter heeft hierbij als bedoeling je er mee te laten stoppen.
Stop ermee!
Blowen:
Tabak oproken
Met wat vloei
En een beetje wiet,
Stop ermee!
Drugs:
Maakt jou kapot
En is gevaarlijk
Voor iedereen,
Stop ermee!
Snijden:
Verlicht de pijn
Van hart en ziel
Het is slecht voor je,
Stop ermee!
Stop ermee!
En wees wie je
Eigenlijk hoort te zijn,
Wees jezelf.
Beste Melchior
BeantwoordenVerwijderenHier valt eigenlijk geen reactie op te plaatsen want het zijn maar korte stukjes uitleg en voor de rest alleen maar knip en plak werk. Sorry dat ik deze keer geen tips kan verzinnen.
Groeten Rein
Beste Melchior,
BeantwoordenVerwijderenJe hebt het goed gedaan. Al is het moeilijk te beoordelen, zoals Rein al zei. Wat ik wel kan zeggen is dat je misschien niet de hele songtekst had moeten kopiƫren, maar gewoon een stukje van bijvoorbeeld het refrein.
Ook had ik liever wat meer tekst gehad van jou zelf met een wat bredere uitleg over waarom je het hebt gekozen en waar het lied nou echt over gaat.
Verder goed gedaan!
Bjorn Fidder